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A wonderful warm golden
light is pouring in through
the window - so warm, in fact,
the cat is bathing in it on the floor
in such utter tranquility
you're almost envious.

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The following comments are for "October Sunrise."
by johnjohndoe

October Sunrise
know that feeling, would be nice sometimes just to mindlessly appreciate the sunshine of the moment. Nice slice of time here, nice slice of sunrise.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

warmth infurred
I need a big bay window to emulate that cat behavior- I can blame it on the need for vitamin D... I admire and identify with this.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

j.jd's feline on floor
Cool warmth..
Enjoyed read..

October child,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

What Do You Mean "Almost"?
Excellent observation. I relate more than I'm comfortable admitting.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

Great read.

( Posted by: MattS [Member] On: October 30, 2006 )

Surprised again
You always have a little surprise for us -- the humor (your humor) is so mundane and obvious it outshines the sophisticated "fine china" of other poetic notions we look for -- like people hunting through antique shops for that perfect find - then you put something like this in front of us and we say "now that would look great on the shelf by the beer steins"..

Nice work, and I am again inspired.


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: October 30, 2006 )

I see you have an affinity for cats too. Simply stated, but catches the 'warmth' of the moment. I sometimes wonder what cats think all day when they're lying around soaking up the sun. Maybe they're thinking about dinner or the next big bird hunt. And I do envy their style of living. Why couldn't we all just sleep all day without a care?

( Posted by: sandra [Member] On: January 30, 2007 )

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