The following comments are for "The Sound of One Hand Clapping" by AK-47
quirky poem u have here
I gotta give you kudos for your modest effort to describe jokingly (I assume) this unanswerable question. I occasionly go for off-beat stuff like this. But I'd be lying to you and other people would think I'm nuts if I give you a higher rating than I'm giving your poem. I'm not sure how you can improve this poem other than correcting the typos "bOOM" and "bANG." Slightly entertaining, though:)
Posted by: pinoy_celt [Member] On: January 14, 2003
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