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The Sound of One Hand Clapping



                                    K -- a ---

p -- w -- i -- n -- g!        K -- a --

p -- o -- w!       KA--BLAM !



bOOM! bANG! Biff! Buzz!

wham bam boom clang



Ka-zoom?

No, that's not it.




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by AK-47

quirky poem u have here
I gotta give you kudos for your modest effort to describe jokingly (I assume) this unanswerable question. I occasionly go for off-beat stuff like this. But I'd be lying to you and other people would think I'm nuts if I give you a higher rating than I'm giving your poem. I'm not sure how you can improve this poem other than correcting the typos "bOOM" and "bANG." Slightly entertaining, though:)

( Posted by: pinoy_celt [Member] On: January 14, 2003 )





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