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open your heart...

Let me go,
into your heart of darkness,
wash away the ugliness,
thats hurting you today.

I\\\'ll bring my paints into your heart,
cover the black with a beautiful work of art.
Let me stop the tears from crying,
oh let the tears go away.

Open your heart,
open your soul,
let me say your wonderful.

Show me everything there is,
let me be there to dry your tears.
Dont hurt anymore because im with you,
I am here to help you through.

No more cutting,
no more drinking,
you dont have to think
you can fly to live.

No more hurting,
no more screaming,
you dont need these things,
no not to live...

I know you have a heart of gold inside,
so let it come out,
dont let it hide.

All the things you feel,
all the things you say,
open your heart to me,
let me take it all away.

just open your heart...
to me...


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The following comments are for "open your heart.."
by grandmasgirl

open your heart..
"I'll bring my paints into your heart..." that for me is a favourite line... there's much compassion and sincerity in this. "you dont have to think/
you can fly to live" there's truth too. in all a truthful, thoughtful poem, the most satisfying of yours I have read to date. thank you very much for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 25, 2006 )

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