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When day is drawing final breath
and nights' lights blink their start of day,
clock-ordered chores are put to rest
and even troubles put away-
I crawl into our waiting bed,
enfold myself within your arms
and let you ease my weary head,
freely submitting to your charms-
The world is tucked away
safe, yet, another day.
If waking brings heart's heavy sorrow
and shattered, fractured times you find;
if all spins out of control tomarrow-
remember our bed and this peace of mind:
Right now the world is tucked away-
safe again for another day

------
Elizabeth Maksymiuk


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The following comments are for "Safe"
by emaks

Elizabeth
This so beautiful thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 24, 2006 )

Safe
A heartening poem this, full of such much needed human warmth… home-made, heart-made sanctuary, and a sense of perspective too, a reminder that our best chance and best hope is “there’s always tomorrow”. Beautiful...

That’s some view btw, blue-ridge mountains?

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 25, 2006 )

I like this
A quiet, happy, safe moment in the midst of whatever goes on around you, every other hour of the day. A good subject for a poem, and a very pleasant read. Made me smile!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

Really wonderful..Eliza
I really like to read ur wonderful poems,Eliza. This one is wonderful as usual..I mean like ur other poems.

Take care and keep smiling...

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 28, 2006 )

Safe
This is a very beautiful poem. Its really lovely how you have someone that can make you feel like this. Lovely.

Divi

( Posted by: DiviJordison [Member] On: November 28, 2006 )





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