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You said I was growing. . .I was dying.
You said it was strength. . . It was the thorns.
You said it was a new color. . . It was wilting
You said tomorrow. . .Im already dead.
You said it was transition. . .I said goodbye.
You said it was laughter. . . It was my sobs.
You thought you knew me. . . I say you dont.
By: Tina ZielkeŠ

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