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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)
A MALTREATMENT OF SILENT VILLAGE
In front of the pompous plateau there stands a crayoned laboratory that investigates the molecule and protons of radium and uranium, and on the rare side there is a provisional camp set by our military force, which split the plateau into 2 parts.
I heard one of my friends that the leader of this camp is a reservoir of western-point history after they set up their camp here, every outsider have to evade passing this hilarious camp side. After their billeting here, the peace of this mountainside is poorly rendered by them.
The leader likes to loaf and eat desalted crackers beside the camp when his subordinates are singing anthem.
We the villagers have fed up their deed, who is going to umpire for us? We just want the abolition of hut in village; hope it will not be a vapor




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