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i was a bad girl,
please forgive me now,
mommy please dont hurt me,
im getting older anyway.

i shouldnt have to feel bad,
feel wrong for what ive done,
but mommy because of you it hurts me,
mommy im trying to move on.

you always said its a bad thing,
although i love him so,
mommy i didnt do the bad thing,
i only did what isnt wrong

mommy i didnt mean to,
but mommy hes more then a friend.
Mommy its not like i slept with him,
just a couple of kisses holding him.

mommy i love him,
i will marry him one day.
so mommy please forgive me,
dont let me feel bad about this today.

mommy i love you,
and you've always said its wrong,
but hes the only one forever,
so please tell me its okay, its not wrong.


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