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Breaking the bind
of humility,
to undress the sake
of norm.

Fetching the meaning
that shakes,
the bearing of our
bone.

Vexing the perpetual
pace,
of our veer and
plan...

...When the balance of
what is,
yields to the vigor
of what can.


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The following comments are for "Mercurial Being"
by matt73

Being
very well done. thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 22, 2006 )

Mercurial Being
tightly exectuted, following with all the precision of cause and consquemce. nothing in this poem is wasted. great stuff.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 22, 2006 )





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