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Chapter 4

"Boy, am I tired," said Edward sitting down.
"Yeah me too," Aline said.
"How long has Sally been in the shower?"
"I don't know. But I do know that she has been in there for a while."
"Maybe I'll go and check on her."
"Go do that, there might be something wrong."
Edward stood up and walked around the corner to the bathroom. He knocked on the door.
"Sally you all right?"
Edward cracked the door open a little ways. He looked in. When he looked in, he saw Sally behind the shower curtain still bathing.
"Sally you all right?"
"Is there somebody there?" Sally said with concern.
"Its just me, Edward. I was checking on you making sure you was all right."
"I'm all right, come on in. I want to talk to you for a few minutes."
Edward stepped in. The place was steamed up. She must have really hot water on in there.
Sally turned the water off. Then open the shower curtain. She was wraped in a towel. He long blond laid down wet on her back. Her long slender legs look as smooth as possible. Her blues eyes looked gorgeous on her. I would love to be with her.
Get a grip, Edward. Her husband has been ripped to shreds, and your here talking about being with her.
Her body was slender too. She looked good. She stepped out of the tub and walked over to the mirror to look herself over.
"Tell me, Edward. Will I be safe from whatever killed my husband?
"Yes, I assure you, Sally you will be."
She turned around and looked into my eyes. They were so inoccent and beautiful.
She walked a little close to me, to where we was face to face.
She hugged him crying.
All Edward could was hug back. He didn't have a clue what was wrong with her. Edward gave her a rag to wipe her eyes off with. Then she looked at him again. Edward lifted his hand and rubbed her cheek. She then took his hand and put it on her butt, then she leaned in to kiss him. Edward didn't resist at all. He kissed her, her soft lips were like heaven to Edward's. She put her tongue in Edward's mouth and started playing with his. Edward started squeezing her butt hard.
Edward heard a door shut then close. He figured that Aline just went for a walk or something.
Edward was about to unwrap her towel when he heard Aline scream. Edward stopped immediately and walked outside to there room.
"What is it, Aline?"
"There is a creature in here, it can turn invisible and back visible."
Edward took out his revolver from his holster on his side.
"Edward, its afraid of the light. It turned the light off when it came in."
"Look over there in the drawel, see if there is a flashlight of some kind."
ALine seard frantically through the drawel.
"No luck."
Great, he thought. Edward paused for a second. He looked to the left of him. The monster was staring him straight in his eyes. All he could see was the monster's eyes.
"Aline," whispered Edward.
"I want you to make a mad dash for the light switch. This thing is looking me straight in the eyes."
He saw Sally walk of the bathroom, still with the towel wraped around her.
"Edward, whats wrong?" Sally said with a concerned tone of voice.
"Sally, get back in the bathroom. I'll explain later."
She did what he told him to do.
"All right, Aline. When I say when. I want you to make that mad dash to the light switch."
"All right."
Aline ran to the light switch with all her might. She made it to the light switch, she flipped the switch on.
And then it revealed the most horriblest creature had ever seen in his life. It moved slowly across the floor. It had to be the size of a horse. With four crab-like legs that fused onto a scaly scorpion body, and two tiny cadaverous arms that swing malignanylt underneath a gigantic gaping orfice that look liked his head. His head was in the shape of a mouth with sharp teeth on it.
The head had to be the weakness of the creature. And also the creature was weary from the light. When the creature opened its mouth to dive at Edward, he took two shots into its head. The two bullets went staright through the creature and hit the wall. What seem to be the creatures blood spallerted everywhere too. It looked like some kind of oil you put inside a car. The creature wince in pain, Edward took another shot at the creature. This time at its neck. It blew a hole through it. The creature screamed and fell down dead on the floor. Then after it died this strange light came around it, it was a strange looking blue light, it lifted the creature up as if it was going to heaven, then it disappeared.
Aline looked me in amazment.
"You killed that thing?"
"Yes I did, thats not the first one. I've seen others that has looked like this one, but this one was a little stronger."
Aline walked over to the bed. "I'm going to take a nap, Edward. This is all too much for me."
"Go ahead."
She layed down and stretch out. Then less then five minutes she was asleep.
Edward put his rovolver back in his holster.
Edward went back to the bathroom. Sally was in there pacing back and forth. When she saw Edward she went over and flung her arms around him.
"Did you kill that thing?"
Edward nodded.
"Its better off you didn't know. Lets call it the one of the darkness creatures, or a ripper. No worries though, I killed it dead."
She kissed him softly on the lips.
"Now where were we?"
Edward leaned in close to her. He started kissing her neck. He then took her towel and unwrapped it. Edward slipped his shoes off, then Sally finished the rest. She pulled his shirt off then she pulled his pants down along with his boxers.
He looked at her perfect body. He breast's were just the right size. Her private region was shaved, no hair.
Then they lay on the floor where they began making love.

To be continued...

Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today. - James Dean

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