Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
10follylolly

You must login to vote



Dreams turn to sunlight.
Illuminating children
Laughing like cherubs
Touching everything with their sticky hands.
Angels catch a sickness
Fall from smog clouds
They land in holes
That we dig in the dirt.
We turn human to die.
Eaten to the bone by parasites
That are being eaten by mouth cancer.
Forget and are forgotten
Fingerprints on the photograph.
Earth is slowly filling with human remains.
We are careful in the dark.
Our breath is smoke
Freezing in the air.
The moon has jaundice and the stars,
They are like strangers,
So cold and faraway.
We would meet beneath the skeletal trees
Licking and cracking lips.
Our hair wet with frost.
Nothing human remains.




Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Human Remains"
by BAAL

Human Remains
some highly effective lines here, the last being the icing on the cake. it's sick, it's sad, but it's strangley intriguing, strangely alluring... just what I've come to expect from your poetry. great stuff.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 21, 2006 )

human remains
i like the images that this brought out for me. its dark and somehow comforting.

( Posted by: kschoen [Member] On: October 25, 2006 )

It's me, Angella
There you go again. Seducing with the grotesque. I love it. I think it ranks as one of your best. I like the ambiguity, playing with words like dough.

( Posted by: follylolly [Member] On: November 7, 2006 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: