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I may bare my very soul
but never bare my buns
that would cause
a total eclipse

If you ever saw me nekkid
and did not die
from sheer horror
I'd have to kill you

------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Halloween Moon"
by Nitz Kitty

Kacee
Thank you for this you brought a smile upon my
face. Thanks very well done

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 20, 2006 )

moon
I got the idea for this from a flash ecard sent to me from a pen friend...Dracula baring his hairy butt to the tune of Blue Moon...thanks Wanda for your comment...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: October 20, 2006 )

Moon
there is, definitely, a state-secret spy feel to the last two lines... buns kept under wraps for reasons of national security... friend of mine said if everyone who ever got to see you naked had to sign the offical secrets act thenit'd save a lot of embarrassment in the long run...

thanks for this Kacee, really made me laugh

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 20, 2006 )

I is what I is
Thanks Lucie...Yes , if I show you my SECRET ...I would have to kill you for it to remain just that...
Shannon...what a man would have to sign would not be an offical secrets act...but a marriage license and I would put an AS IS CLAUSE at the bottom...what you see is what you get....thanks to you both for reading and glad it made you laugh...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: October 20, 2006 )

Haaa
This made my Friday eve, after a long week of repititious burn-out at work. Halloween, indeed! Trick or treat, right? Well this one certainly is -- both.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: October 20, 2006 )

B W
Your comment made my day...I'm glad my poem helped make your Friday eve a bit better...My goal...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: October 20, 2006 )





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