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You stand alone in my thoughts,
a dream...
I search for your face,
your eyes...
I scream!

For I can't find the color of your eyes,
the shape of your mouth...
I run in terror,
I flee I shout!

Am I going insane?
To answer mundane.

Come with me I beg with words that only
you would understand.

You just continue walking away without a
backwards glance.
You do not answer...
or change your stance.

So I fade into the fog filled night,
who is to love?
I am too weak to fight.


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