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this space is unknown but not unfamiliar
it vibrates at the frequency of a lesser mass
and succumbs to the weight of something of
greater density
it is
penetrable
vulnerable
more like water than air
something inescapably perceived at a conscious level
with a force of itsí own making
something akin to free will
yet governed by universal laws and truths
god dwells hungrily in the sub-atomic tapestry of commingling
flesh

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~Drake Lightle

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drakelightle@comcast.net


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The following comments are for "the physics of intimacy"
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Physics of the Physical; Beautiful
I really like this piece, the way that you interplay physics with the physical. Your a very enlightened poet. Great work.

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: October 24, 2006 )





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