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you are the night i dream...
the shadow that embraces my body.
in your gentle caress,
your fingers dig deep into me,
and my soul bleeds from your touch.
in your breath i drown
and in the pains that you kiss me,
i cry.
i never understand your coming and goings
but each time you come...
i cease to exist. i
am devoured in the bliss of you.
this is the shifting tenderness you create
and where i taste your touch
i become and reborn....
you are my night
and i am become your day.

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