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Forever,your girl

I started fresh,
I started new,
I started a new life,
thats not so blue.

When you asked me those words,
you gave me the world,
I think you actually said,
"Will you be my baby girl."

No more tears will fall,
not sad from my eyes,
only good things,
will make me cry.

I dont know how else to explain,
how much i love you so,
and just how much i need you,
I'll forever be your girl.

The day i met you,
I started a new life,
I never want to change it,
we're forever,you and I.


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