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sorry if there's spelling errors, im in a hurry, but i hope you all like it, so comment when your done!


As i sit in this class,
and think of all the times we've shared,
you don't know how happy it makes me feel,
to know you'll always be there.

Even though I'll see you soon,
this empty feeling digs in,
wishing you were here,
to say I love you, and always will.

Im not sure if I'll get to see you,
all i want is to be by your side,
to have you start talking, but stop you,
with a kiss, and a hug holding tight.

I wish we could run away,
just leave and not return,
start our lives right now,
taking your hand in mine.

Baby I love you,
and baby i need you,
please just promise me now,
say you'll never leave, say you love me so.

I'm yours, i promise,
I'll never leave your side,
I love you, forever,
baby I promise, my hearts your for life.

------
~+stephie+~


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The following comments are for "I promise"
by grandmasgirl

Beside the errors
The poem is hearty, filled with chunks of love, heart and soul. Nicely said.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: October 13, 2006 )

Stronger Than Love
What a lucky man, asuming you're heterosexual. In either case, It must be nice, to have someone feel that strongly.

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 13, 2006 )





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