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Nocturne



Night closes over us
Buttons at the moon
Watches

Tells secrets to
Fox trotter
Coon rover

Back up the road
Cordwood holds
Two stacks of clothes

On the warm breath of
Summer
Moonlit cricket
Knows




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The following comments are for "Nocturne"
by Flonigus

Nocturne
to be read in furtive whispers I reckon, secretive, sultry mood this piece has. liked the last two lines best. loved this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 12, 2006 )

night. PDF. Pretty Darn...
I love the implied still life. That's how I want to see it. Inherently igniting.

And so I could bear no more reading your yummy works online. I have diligently copypasted them with my graceful piano fingers, compiling them as a PDF - so I could read it at my own hedonistic pleasure.

Also please - you absolutely got to use it to promote your writing. I am your No. 1 reader. I think PDFs could be printed as a book.

I am sending it to you now.

your torrid Tori.

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 17, 2011 )





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