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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

Lucky to say, my girlfriend is not a female of vanity, she dresses slovenly always, so you may felt she looks gloomy, maybe its affected by her average dressing.
She even shows gigantic contempt to those people who are always spending too much money on useless things.
I remember the first day we dated, she wash her own face beside a geyser, by seeing the face splashed up and down on her face alternatively, I did spit on such a behavior, thus, there was a gulf between us in managing money.
Inside her pocket there are always only a few pennies.
Her daily ritual after home is to count how much money she spent in a day, her consuming attitude is also variable; she donates her extra money to charitable organization set by our chancellor.
But do not fuss about it; I get alone with her in harmony now,
Many people may regard such a psychology like a fossil.
Every one of us must believe that spending extravagantly is inferior to economizing, if you were extravagant, please modulate your inner desire and make a stiff resolution.
We believe that only a true inner heart is a spotless treasure

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