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THE WAY MY GIRLFRIEND DISPOSE OF HER WEALTH
Lucky to say, my girlfriend is not a female of vanity, she dresses slovenly always, so you may felt she looks gloomy, maybe it¡¦s affected by her average dressing.
She even shows gigantic contempt to those people who are always spending too much money on useless things.
I remember the first day we dated, she wash her own face beside a geyser, by seeing the face splashed up and down on her face alternatively, I did spit on such a behavior, thus, there was a gulf between us in managing money.
Inside her pocket there are always only a few pennies.
Her daily ritual after home is to count how much money she spent in a day, her consuming attitude is also variable; she donates her extra money to charitable organization set by our chancellor.
But do not fuss about it; I get alone with her in harmony now,
Many people may regard such a psychology like a fossil.
Every one of us must believe that spending extravagantly is inferior to economizing, if you were extravagant, please modulate your inner desire and make a stiff resolution.
We believe that only a true inner heart is a spotless treasure