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in valley of monuments

through mist-inflected atmosphere

icon-shadowed hungry ghost

appearing to have appearance

though already detached

from this attachment

meditates

levitates

before deciding where to dine


100706


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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for "hungry ghost"
by Bobby7L

Hungry Ghost
well visualised haunted/ haunting. distant but definite presence, almost human...

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 9, 2006 )

streamlined,
amazingly descriptive, and very much worth the read. i have today off (the holiday!) and thought i would do a little reading this morning. i liked your poem, and wanted you to know.

john.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: October 9, 2006 )

raven/wanda/Shannon/jjdoe
ravenblack- Not up to speed with your writing. Will look for. Extravagant # noted. Thanks for leaving clue.

wanda- Your continued interest in my work is greatly appreciated. Extravagant rating noted.

Shannon- Thank you kindly.

jjd- Your appreciating compression is noted. Much thanks.


October child,


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 10, 2006 )

famished

Like the metaphors very much, this style us somewhat different from your usual. Anyway, like the dark aura this work has.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: October 10, 2006 )

Laura: Rootless
Back to poetic roots here...See first Lit posts , from Dec. 2004: "Lunger" and "Guru", from college days.

Much thanks,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 11, 2006 )

"Conscious and cognitive"
Lucie-
Your kind words are greatly appreciated, as I consider your voice Lit-true.

With utmost respect,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 11, 2006 )

windchime-IT.. I....
Lucie,
Much thanks for return visit..



Burning up
On fire
But not hot

Uneasily amused
030606



( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 12, 2006 )

Hey, Bobby,
Just passing through; looking for the current "most-read" poem of the week at Lit.org.

It's like a ghost.

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: October 14, 2006 )

Flonigus/ ivordavies
John- It and I thank you kindly.

Ivor- Just heard "Superman", by Kinks..Always enjoyed lyrics of Ray Davies.
Thanks for leaving clue of visit. Extravagant # noted.


RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 14, 2006 )





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