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Mesmerized by your presence;
Captivated in your splendour.

Synchronised, in our thoughts;
Material and spiritually

Mundane tasks become implicated
In subsistence by the appeal of your touch.

Enchanted with your constant elegance.
Features reminiscent of the unsurpassed in humanity



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The following comments are for "My Mind's Eye"
by MattS

minds eye
excellent! IM JEALOUS OF UR POEMS!! lol

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: October 9, 2006 )





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