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Growl at me again
Fangs to rip a heart out
Taste this blood

Run with the beast
Savor my moment

Reach for what
You cannot hold
Just long for me
More
More
More...

I jest at your pace
The beast of my being
Steady as molten iron

This ephigy in your gaze
Waits for you
Come
Come
Come...

Feel my cold breast
In your stop
Pointed my steel
Plunging deeper and deeper
Moan as I sing and
Savor your scent

As I drink

As I linger

As I see

Your icy breath
End
End
End.

Raven Knight



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The following comments are for "Taste Me"
by ravenblack

Tasty
R.V.

Very tasty work indeed, and evocative. I like the way it flows, and the style.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: October 10, 2006 )

Taste
Macbeth and Wanda, many respectful thanks for your generous rating...much thanks to those that took the time to read. This stemmed from a cloudy day, following a graphic nightmare, aimed toward an evil stalker, whom I fear. Recently he has been convicted, no less than ten to serve.

Be very wary of SOME so called holy men...

Raven

( Posted by: ravenblack [Member] On: November 23, 2006 )

How did I miss this?
Powerful poem, full of energy. Left me breathless.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: November 24, 2006 )

Viper breathless...
Thanks for your time, looking forward to your future thoughts, critique and input...

Raven

( Posted by: ravenblack [Member] On: November 25, 2006 )

desvelado...
cool ass comment...fore real, Thanks...
ravenrawsome

( Posted by: ravenblack [Member] On: July 1, 2008 )

Funny thing...
Funny thing, this could so easily be a description of me...lol..What was your inspiration for writing this? Very nicely written..

( Posted by: colinbaker62 [Member] On: December 1, 2012 )





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