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I long for those naked nights
and streets full of lights
never will I miss the way,
that you used to say
"everything will be fine"
when I wait in line
for my turn to cry it all out
so when you tickle me, I'll shout
I just want to get through all of this
so we can return to our bliss

Yeah, this is my return to poetry. I've been dabbling pretty heavy into art lately. I don't wish to comment on what's going on in my life, because I just don't want to. I mean, it's tenth grade.

Mad monkey fling poo!

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