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To live is to see
The beauty of life, to be
Internal war of passion, I feel
The drug filled veins of love, I need
Taking a sip from the lips, of she
Never fulfilling the thirst, I breathe
Battling the addiction, I preach
Till the day the doors to heaven, I breach



"Sometimes,
Sometimes we keep on caring
For someone who’s love was not true
Sometimes we keep on wearing
The hope that the dream might still come true
Sometimes..."

'Deraj'



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The following comments are for "To live is to see"
by deraj

so true...
Your words are so true.. i love reading your work, as you know, so keep writting!this poem i paticular tells the truth, it hurts but im sure we have all felt this way at least for a little while... im very sorry for the pain you must still feel for this girl you write about..you are a wonderful writter! so write more often! ~your friend

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: October 29, 2006 )





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