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Something is strange, as usual. Your love, my darling, you are not normal in your love. When I tell you my love for you is as big as the universe
You hush me like a child.
When I tell you my heart sings for you,
You tell me to hide the words and put aside such foolishness.
Why are you so strange? You are not normal in your love, my darling.
When you are far your forgetfulness and your deceit
Wound me and I spend all those nights over the fire.
Then you come close and I see that you miss me but you hide it in your heart.
Something is strange, as usual. Your love, my darling, you are not normal in your love.
Tell me you love me, what will happen?


10/1/06



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