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Meet me at that playground on the moon
you know the one
on the sea of tranquility
where we can hang upside down
and swing by the stars.
We can spin on the galaxy
and slide down the cometís tail.
You can teeter and I can totter;
what good would having gravity do?
We can dip our toes in the black hole
And eat the Milky Way off a stick.

Toss your cares far away on that blue and green ball
And meet me at that playground on the moon.

Iíll get there first!

10/1/06



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The following comments are for "For eRaban"
by Majnuna

For eRaban
I usually end up writing a rant for your pieces, but this time I won't. All there is to say and all there is to know is that, far as I'm concerned, this piece is perfect and there's nothing I didn't love about it. Thanks so much for choosing to share it here.

Shannon.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 2, 2006 )





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