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So many other's thoughts surround me
I don't even know which are mine.
I tried to say I loved you,
But it's been so long
I'm not sure how I feel.
I know exactly what I mean.
Silent love plays in my head,
Words could never tell you.
Is it you that I want or just someone
Who will take me away from the nothing?
I'm not sure how I feel.
I know exactly what I mean.
Does the whole world dissappear
when I shut my eyes?
Or am I just dreaming?
This love is not my own,
But I'm writing it for you.
Maybe someday you will read this,
And you'll know just what to do.

------ - Alternative Indie Rock for the masses

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The following comments are for "Sorry For The Rhyme"
by xenosss

Sorry for the rhyme
Good Poem, I really like it and can relate!
Keep it up:)

( Posted by: ShadowedPhoenix [Member] On: December 9, 2004 )

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