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Once upon a time in a land far from modern reality,
was a strange man who knew,
the meaning of the lost knowledge of love...

I live in the love that is in the heart,
of the girl I wish to be with...

The reason for my birth is now clear,
as I am to save this girl I love,
from the dreadful darkness which surround her...

As she has given to me my perpose,
let me in return give her life thru my love and trust

Together now, together til death do parts us,
hand in hand, arm in arm, body in body, soul in soul,
shall we never let each other go...

More than seems, less than known...

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