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(Bound) to her devotion,
as she like a willing Slave,
serves my every desire...

(By) fate or chance has she come to me,
wanting and wishing to please me completely,
asking only love in return...

(Beautiful) like a Goddess born anew,
divine in mind, body and soul,
shall I never let her go...

(Benevolence) so uncommon, pure and ture,
as her eyes like heaven does redeem my soul,
giving unto my empty husk life once again...

(Beyond) her mere years in spirtual depth,
the body of a woman with the heart of a child,
her soul that of an elder wisdom unseen...

(Belief) once again restored within my doubtful mind,
by this now fallen Angel who knows not what she is,
my perpose now known to me is clear and set,
now shall I be her wings that she may once again fly...

More than seems, less than known...

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