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Violently, desperately gasping for air which is not there

Painfully, needfully inhaling nothing enters me

The breath, the air, the life sustaining essence not found

Your voice the air to my ears, revives me

Your image the breath to my soul, vitalizes me

The breath I gasp for, is your loving embrace

The air I inhale now, is the thought of your love for me

More than seems, less than known...

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The following comments are for "The Breath I Gasp For..."
by MagnusVonMythos

I like the passion in this. How the love
you have for someone makes you feel alive.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 29, 2006 )

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