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Step into my world
Don't be afraid, don't shout
Here people take their faces off
And let their insides out

Everything here is real
There's no point in being scared
Everyone gets to show themselves
And everything is shared

Here noone is confused
Here noone is abused
No need to be fake
No need to feel used

Here noone lies
Here there's no disguise
Noone's truly happy here
But at least everybody tries


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The following comments are for "Inside out"
by Jewlicious

Inside Out
It would be a better place if everyone showed their true selves I think. I like the third stanza the best . I like all very done
thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 28, 2006 )

Inside out
often, the simple truths are the most profound, and here a profound truth is told simply. and effectively. enjoyed this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 28, 2006 )

Thanks
Thanks Wanda/AMG,
Written probably 6-7 years ago..I think I understand the world better today..Anyway, just wanted to say thanks for the comments

( Posted by: Jewlicious [Member] On: September 29, 2006 )

The Entrails of Inhibition
Our Souls turn us inside out...
to face our inhibitions

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 8, 2016 )





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