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B-40 Medium

Toothbrush tingles
Tango thoughts
Flamenco down below

Flossbound fingers
Tangled knots
Poetic ebb and flow

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The following comments are for "B-40 Medium"
by Flonigus

didn't realise there was such an adventure of abundance of sensation in brushing one's teeth. now I know better. I like this, it dances.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 27, 2006 )

Very well done. I agree it dances. thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 27, 2006 )

Appointment Reminder
I believe current guidelines are to dance twice a day and to see your dancist once every six months.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: September 28, 2006 )

"Colgate with Gardol"
"Mr. Tooth Decay can't get past this (tap-tap)Invisible Shield!"

Clever poem. Is that B-40 Medium from the folks at Oral-B, my favorite toothbrush maker? My choice of weapon is the Oral-B B-40 Large.

Due to your poem, I'll have to pay more attention the next time I brush & floss.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: September 29, 2006 )

Trans Form!
This is such a ripe haiku material - my kind, two-stanza, with punchlines. Please try your hand at haiku, stating with this one

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 14, 2011 )

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