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Leaves are falling
Days are windy
Cold breezes flowing
All anew

Coats abundant
Morning frost
Let thee bid ab’due
Summers lost


------
Cynthia R. Yildirim

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by LovesEssence

Fall
very well done. thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 26, 2006 )





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