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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

His psychological ability is not as bad as we think, maybe he is just tired of undue and variable training lessons only, and after I investigate these appliance for their training inside their inferior gym, I dare to assert loudly that these equipment will not only soothe their body but also makes their muscle stiff, I held contempt in those suck stuff in my early age when I reposed last night.
However, unfortunately, there is no enough charitable fund for the out-of-date appliance, but in this area, most of wealth was occupied by timid upstarts.
How to modulate the weak part in this gym? No one knows, its must be the best way to inquire our chancellor.
Outside the buildings is a boisterous downtown, collapsing it and rebuild a new one is a stupid mode of solving the problem.
Last night an architect characterized this building as a showy work of local officer.
This event also tells us, a showy building is not always spotless in any aspect.


The following comments are for "THE MALIGNANT SPIRIT OF PSYCHOLOGY"
by maserati

the biggest loser
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( Posted by: ToltheOpire [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

Maybe, being schitzophrenic has dampened my intelligence, but I sure as heck don't understand a single thing you said.

( Posted by: davepfingston [Member] On: December 27, 2008 )

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