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Discover the bastard
that stabs you in the back
long reach, long knife
Do not turn
Do not love
Forever distant
Distant forever
To love is blasphemy
To turn is suicidal
What reach, What knife
stabs you in the back
Uncover the bastard

DJ '08

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