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fair it should be
that he should be a lark,
singing for the world
though he's deaf himself.

and she, trembling in the shadows
though vigilant in the light
for one who lives in both,
she hides her fear well.

oh, to the girl lost to naivete!
and the man who searches for freedom unknown!
and all the ways they can never be together!

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by Reiko Korin

What can I say? I'm profoundly impressed, and thankful that Crowe has installed that nifty random reading feature. Looking forward to more.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: May 3, 2003 )

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