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Tormented feelings race through my head
I wake up every morning and wish I were dead
I don't know what the hell to do anymore
I feel like shit
This torture has a silent scorn
I wish there was a way out of this

Anger, pain
Bleeding, hate
Sick of all this
Sick of this shit
Anger, pain
Bleeding, hate
Tortured, my soul
Lack of control

The worst is yet to come
My mind is racing
I can't control the feelings
This shit is encasing me

Anger, pain
Bleeding, hate
Sick of all this
Sick of this shit
Anger, pain
Bleeding, hate
Tortured, my soul
Lack of control

Why do I have to feel like this
My life is ruined, I'm fucking pissed
There is now way out
No way to escape this
No way to break free
No way out


------
DJ '08


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The following comments are for "Dead"
by DiviJordison

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I've felt like this. Sucks, doesn't it?

"This torture has a silent scorn" - that line says so much! This poem is full of angry, resigned, desperation.

Hope things are looking a little better today-

blessings,
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: September 24, 2006 )

Linkin Park
I feel a linkin park riff in the background, heavy on the techno-vocal. Angsty, all I can say.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: September 24, 2006 )





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