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This rose is like you
It has beauty and the power to endure
This rose is like me
It will never die nor fade into dust
As this silk rose I give to thee
I will last a lifetime in this state of mind
As I think of your enchanting smile and inner beauty
I see this beauty within your eyes
As this rose of silk you are
As the silk rose am I
We are both of silk
The rose we hold
We embrace
Each otherís rose

More than seems, less than known...

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