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I don't know
Is this just a cover up?
So you donít have to blame yourself?

Do you remember the days
When we used to play?
Do you remember the days
When we used to say
"I love you"?

Look at yourself
Look at us

Should I try to work this out?
I can't feel this way
Because it's your fault

Look at us now
Are you happy?
I try to talk
But you won't listen

Are you happy now?


------
DJ '08


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