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Wishing you would leave me alone
But then when you leave,
I wish you were here

Feeling like a deer in the open
I contemplate my every move
Wondering if I should act at all

Nervous about making mistakes
Never knowing what to do
I am hopelessly locked up in my mind

Thinking about what to do
I never get anywhere
I wish I could finish my task

Wishing you would leave me alone
But then when you leave,
I wish you were here

Oh please let this stop
I hate this loneliness
I'm drowning myself in

Within my overworked mind
I see that I've been trapped
Inside my made up paranoia of life

I want to sleep forever
But I will never forgive myself
For not wanting you around.

------
Kellie Lachata


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The following comments are for "Wide-Eyed"
by ducktape

Wide-Eyed
"But I will never forgive myself/ For not wanting you around." that's a gem of a line right there. I can feel the agony of indecision in this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 20, 2006 )





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