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i got so sick and tired of fantasies im living in....
i waited for signs but just found all of them disappointing...
they didnt take away the pain nor ease it...
but just help me fool myself to think that i'm not hurting...

my life seemed so wrecked the day you went away
that hope looks like it'll never come again
but wounds are made to remind us of the past
and time is enough to say it has been healed at last

maybe i really love you that's why i set you free
coz that's what it's supposed to be
but it wont conceal the fact that we can never be
and that's the reason why we need to live separately

so now i'm setting our lives free
yours from my grip, and mine from my grief....

u always hurt me, u always make me cry...
u turn my days into nights and shift into darkness the remaining light...
yesterday u just made my spirit so high...
but now u caused me to breakdown and cry...

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The following comments are for "letting go"
by adiktus

A weird connection
I just read Wanda's poem "Faith" and this kind of reminds me of what she put in her poem. I don't mean to slight you on this effort. You have put your heart out there for us, it is obvious.

If I may, I would urge you to visit Wanda's poem, see if you capture the same meaning after reading that -- it is really eerie what she wrote somewhat addresses your feelings here.

Wanda has a knack for writing really simple, short, from the heart poems that are very good at attacking a single life element.

I have read some of your poems and I see a lot of similarities -- meaning this as a compliment because putting your heart out there for all to read is a really gutsy thing for a poet.

Nice job


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: September 21, 2006 )

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