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all sunshine makes a desert

and i've proved that correct

to gain only happiness

is to suffer from tremendous sadness.

as i pass thru the holes of obstacles

i've learned to smile.

and as i enter every room of happiness

i've got to know how to cry.

with every breath i take

and every move i make

i get a lesson about life

and with that i've learned alot.

u always hurt me, u always make me cry...
u turn my days into nights and shift into darkness the remaining light...
yesterday u just made my spirit so high...
but now u caused me to breakdown and cry...

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The following comments are for "indeed"
by adiktus

very well done. I like second stanza the best.
thank you for posting

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: September 19, 2006 )

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