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Empty
I can't feel these lies anymore
empty
Hold me close, but it wont help
Leave me here, I feel death
make it end, it wouldn't matter
all our lives are dreams
of our wost enimies
empty
breath it in
. . .

Ivy nicole New

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If I did it...I didn't mean to.
If I hurt you...I didn't mean to.
If I left you...I didn't mean to.
If I scared you...I didn't mean to.
If I loved you...I didn't mean to.


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by Nicicole

...eh
Well..I dont know what was going on..it just kinda happened..I'm getting ready to post some orignal story work up tho...PLEASE be gentle!

( Posted by: Nicicole [Member] On: December 8, 2002 )





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