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Im not alone
From everything
I have...

I sit alone and think
While you move around and take
Theres a tidal wave inside of me
And it won't stope till I wake

Hit me..
Beat me..
Hurt me...
It won't matter in the end
Because I'm not alone
I'll walk around that bend
And find new a new friend

I see you..
Through the window of light
And life flashes by me
And I have to hold on tight

You look at me
And you want to I know
You want to go at me
And rape me

Hit me..
Beat me..
Hurt me...
It won't matter in the end
Because I'm not alone
I'll walk around the bend
And find a new friend

I'm not the only one
And I'm not at all alone
You never seem to be done
You just persecute and stone

*A little guitar solo here*

I want you..
To notice me..
In the way I want you to..
But it won't ever happen

I'm not the only one...
And I'm not at all alone
Can't you really see that?
I'm not at all alone

Hit me..
Beat me..
Hurt me...
It won't really matter in the end
I'll walk around that bend
And find a new friend

Yea so ...
Hit me........hit me.......hit me.....
Beat me.......beat me........beat me...
Hurt me......hurt me........hurt me....
Hit me.......hit me.........hit me...
beat me.......beat me.......beat me....
Hurt me......hurt me........hurt me.....
...*tone softens a lot to almost a whisper and a few bass/electric chords and light symbles*

It won't really the end..
I'll just walk around that bend...
And find another friend...

Itachi: You lack you know why?
Sasuke: W-why..?
Itachi: Because you lack it....hatred.

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The following comments are for "He Isn't Alone"
by Wicked Voodoo

This was very nice, Voodoo.

I particularly liked the 'chorus'.

I've a feeling that this one is going to strike a few...chords?!

--Jasmine (who has seen one too many Austin Powers films! *Note the 'Quotation fingers'*)

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: November 19, 2002 )

Very nice
I could hear the song in my mind.

Very nicely written..I like the ending.


( Posted by: Rys [Member] On: November 19, 2002 )

Thanks You
Thank you for your wonderful comments. Your inspiration to keep on writing lyrics. Strange thing is this one came to me while I was listening to a Nirvana song.

( Posted by: Wicked Voodoo [Member] On: November 20, 2002 )

yea.. a good start
these are little more intense than some of my songs... but hey, my real music is all at home in my lyric books as well. I play guitar and have hopes of a band, it kicks ass. i know. anyways ... ur lyrics are pretty blunt, why not leave some mystery for your viewers? Itd make it a lil more touchy. think about it. lol

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )

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