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Love is like a bank,
you must invest
to gain interest.

Money is like time,
worthless without someone
to spend it with.

I come to you with
love, kindness and devotion
to invest.

I am ready to spend
what time I have left
with you, if only you
could love me as I am.

I now await your answer
would you be forever my wife

More than seems, less than known...

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