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Stay where you are, don't come any closer,
If you do I will get hurt.
See, you're the only reason I'm writing,
You're the reason for my flirt.
I think of you, I think of those "what ifs",
Silent I then face what's real.
Love is all I have and all I give you.
You'll never see, never feel.
You won't ever know what I felt for you,
Know that I have loved you dear.
So hear me say, my heart for you it aches,
Pain inflicted when you're near.

-Charles-

Note: This one is sort of acrostic, complete words of even and uneven lines respectively make 2 diffrent lines.


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The following comments are for "If You're Silent You'll Know Pain"
by ManusFrigus

Charles, serio mati
Nice little piece you got here. It's kind of cruel though, the person you wrote it for will never know a thing. Maybe a radikal change came to pass?
See you on the flipside

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: September 17, 2006 )

Good Work
I feel this one, Charles... It's pretty spot-on for (probably) many people. I like the added touch of the acrostic. Thank you for calling it out. I like puzzles!

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: September 19, 2006 )





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