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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

AN UNBELIEVABLE USER OF INSECTICIDE
How much insecticide have we overused to transcend the general capacity? If we cluster the whole measurement, it is unbelievable. One of the prime pollution is caused by this, you can see insecticide cans in grove, they are being throwing here in sequence, many people throw them casually, we can put our environment in comparison with that of new Zealand, out city is bustling. By thinking of it, I pick up them by nipper in order to furnish my home by those cans.
The environmental groups and some officers were disputing the ecological protection uninterruptedly, and searching who is the real initiator in this pollution event, after 3-year investigation, they find their regent is the initiator of this event, but he is somewhat deceptive, its hard to believe he is a fountain of overusing insecticide, hereafter, he will no longer be a regent at all but only a prisoner.



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