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With a parrot's sense
of chang (ing times)
ing times (of chang)

A modeling clay mess-terpiece
clutching the crutch/clutch

Now guess who's the king.

Tear up
it it
down, tape

We'll never find the strings,
| | | |
never say a thing.

So sign our names to the petition
(for a curtain ring position).

Play the
pantomime (pantomime) shell
(shell) charade (shell)

Just a pink horse
In a pink (pink horse)parade.

Now STOP
ESREVER REPAINT

This happened to be
more than a choke
of the exhaust

Flip the switch
Pull the rope
Turn the wheels
YOU'RE A JOKE.

Now you're back where you're
DOOMED
TO
BELONG.

GUESS WHO.

------
What is the truth? Ask the majority.


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The following comments are for "Staplegun Sabotage"
by Lachrym

Lachrym
Very very cool. I read it this morning, then came back to read it again and comment because I enjoyed it so much. You play with words and structures with a sure hand, without the triteness that often accompanies such experiments.

I hope we get more from you soon. Perhaps I'll go back and re-read your earlier posts.

Try my "the solipsist" if you have the time. Maybe you'd enjoy it -- or maybe you'll find it beneath your abilities! Haha.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )





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