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Trouble.
Go away.
I see you following me.
I see you lingering in my shadow.

Trouble.
Disappear.
Take all your tricks and mischief.
Don't even come near me.

Trouble.
Be quiet.
Don't scream so loud.
Find someone else in this crowd.

Trouble.
Go away.
I see your reflection.
I see my face.

------
Erica R. Lindsey aka Windsong [got married in '08]



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by Windsong

Trouble
Hell yeah! Love the last stanza especially (except for the typo, of course!).

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )

I liked, but..
..unlike Viper, the last line of the last stanza didn't do it for me. "I see your reflection / in my face" may have. I really did like it up to that last line, though. Great rhythm, good use of repetition.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: September 12, 2006 )

thanks
Thanks guys for commenting...[i fixed the typo, lol.]

( Posted by: Windsong [Member] On: September 14, 2006 )





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