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Vary alone did I feel, as death I did welcome
In my darkess nightmere, had I fallen from grace
Deeply Wounded heart and soul, my life in total woe
Everyday worse than the last, no hope left inside me
Lost in the isolation of my shaddered dreams

I cried myself into slumberís empty embrace
Sarrow looming overhead, with each night alone in bed

Disease of the mind begins to rot, as my thoughts do fade
Evil seeking to steal my soul, as I hid myself away
Fearful and tattered my spirit, began to decay
I no longer would fight, this loosing battle for truth
Never again would I, feel love so pure and true
Inside I could feel the end of me, for without love I die
Total lose of love, unable to give left me cold
Entangled within me, the feelings of love and hate
Longing to love, hatred of the wrongs I had suffered
Yearning once again to be held, I closed my eyes in dread

Ending offten bring new beginings, alas an angel apeared
There before my soul, did she once again kendle
Everything within me fears her, yet I long for her touch
Remembering all my past pain, I fight this need within
Never again to be touched by passion, she inflames my heart
Always the fantasy haunting me, I shun reality
Loving totally and fully, giving of my blood and tears
Looking within her soul, I no longer have my fears
Youthful and loving, she reaches out to me with honesty

Looking within me she can see, my inner child needing to be held
Opening her heart to me freely, she embraces my battered bady
Very softly I kiss her, with all my loving passion
Even my fear removed, for my love is far greater for her
Doubt not the power of youthful love, nor allow age to blind you


P.S. There is a hidden message within this poem... There is a hidden line of text, see if you can find it.

More than seems, less than known...

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