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My Heart like the hardest dimaond,
shaddered at the touch of a flower’s softest peddle

Within your arms I will find salvation,
away from you I know only damnation

Eye like a darkened cave into an unknown world,
I long to become lost forever with them

Lips of silky seduction beckoning to engulf me,
I desire and lust for their touch upton my flesh

Hair of onyx casting a warm peaceful shadow,
my face seeks shelter and safey buried within

Shoulders so soft yet strong welcome my sarrowful head,
needing to lay my battered head upon them

I have found myself within you,
as I become lost forever in your world

My soul is yours allow it to enter you,
that we may possess one another in full

Never cast me out less I parish never to return,
I will reside within you as long as you will permit me

I fear every moment without you,
for it could be my last

I fear not to be at your side every moment,
for once you are away I may never again see you

I fear my life is at an end,
yet I struggle to live on because of you

I fear I will fail you in some way,
and you will never again tell me you love me

I fear my love for you is beyond any I have known,
for it is ripping me apart as each minute I spend away from you

I fear to speak that it may be unpleasing to you,
for if it were you would never again speak to me

I am a fearful man... I am a loving man...
I am a betrayed man...I am a honest man...
I am a rejected man... I am a passionate man...
I am a destroyed man... I am a resirected man

You have given me what only others have taken away...
Everything I need and desire, so I give you the one thing that is mine
My name.... I love you Videl Von Mythos

More than seems, less than known...

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